Wednesday 21 June 2017

Bully Story

THE DAY THE BULLIES STOPPED.
Joe that STINKS. Said Bob the bully. Everybody in the class started laughing. Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha! Joe felt embarrassed. Then at lunch Bob stole Elliot’s Sandwich out of his lunchbox and through it in the bin. Awww man! I was looking ford to that Peanut Butter and Jam sandwich. Said Elliot. The next day John was doing his test and Jack the bully copied John’s answers but John gets some answers wrong so Jack did too. Finally Joe was ready to face his fear and go stand up to those bullies so after school he went over to the bullies and said. STOP BULLYING!!! They got so scared they never bullied again.

3 comments:

  1. great work Riley you have lot of description in your story

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  2. Great work Riley I like your work but you could make your story more longer because a bully wouldn't be scared and run away because someone said "STOP BULLYING"

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