Monday, 15 May 2017

Story Starter

Story Starter


Sam is a boy and he was in the bathroom on his sister's Smartphone, because he borrowed it to play a fart game witch was a prank, well a toilet MONSTER with 6 LONG BLOOD SUCKING TENTACLES stole it and took it back down the toilet. So he flushes himself down the toilet and now he’s in the sewerage pipe riding an alligator to the monster's lair. By the time Sam got to the toilet monster’s lair. The Monster had already started playing on the fart game with 5 other Monsters watching it. Sam was trying to think of a plan, While the toilet Monster played on the phone. By the time Sam thought of a plan the toilet Monster was getting hungry because it smelt Sam! So it thru the smartphone away and Sam caught it yay!!! Whispered Sam I don’t have to use my plan any more but I’ve got to get out of here before I get eaten! So he runs to a lever and pushes it up and then he gets sucked up the pipe above him. And ends up back in the bathroom he walked out and into his sister's room and  gives the phone back to his sister. It is a little smelly. said Sam’s sister. That's because the fart game over flowed. Said Sam. That’s all right and thank you for giving the phone back Sam.    

8 comments:

  1. I am very impressed with your adventurous story telling Riley. You really took me on an adventure with your imaginative writing! Thank you. I look forward to many more. Love Mummy

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    1. Hi Riley, A very imaginative story. How much have you learnt about punctuation yet? It would be great to see some more in your writing. x

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  2. Wow Riley I love your story starter It really made me image a picture in my head

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  3. it's a very big story starter

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  4. I loved this story. Well done Riley

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